Eating my ears
That parasitic tune.
Explaining my fears, where
Love and hate are strewn.
To my head it’s stuck on
It’s not coming off.
Like a hat I will don
And will sadly never get to doff.
Ouch a parasitic tune…
Parasitic tune…goodness that is a tough one playing in one’s head
Ha! Loved the ending.
Normally I’m not that fond of rhyming, but you do it a way that intrigues and disarms. Loved the images & sounds of “that parasitic tune-love and hate are strewn” –in this short piece you made each word count, and it will stay with me a while. Thanks for sharing.
Ack! Turn it off already! 🙂
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Soft, Breathless Kisses. Waves Rocking Our boat. Four heartbeats, Four waves, Four knots. Dancing On top Of the waves. 2 lovers, 2 oars, 4 eternity. With The sound Of the sea Pulsing in our ears And The red glowing sunset ahead, We’ll sail on.
It’s never going to be. It just was. The dreams she had Have been eternally frozen. It was always going to be, Though it was far too soon. And I only see her now In moments unchosen.