Through the opaque – TB

11 Apr

The girl of love,
Tapped on the glass,
Waved through the opaque,
And said words I only wished she had.


10 Responses to “Through the opaque – TB”

  1. kaykuala h August 11, 2015 at 10:33 am #

    One craves for some good things but sadly it might not be readily available.


  2. vandana August 11, 2015 at 10:49 am #

    Just like so many unfulfilled wishes, she too is framed.

  3. Kerry O'Connor August 11, 2015 at 1:50 pm #

    A nice capture of the moment, although I confess myself baffled by the final line. Perhaps the opaque glass obscured the speaker’s view.

    • crayfish August 11, 2015 at 5:24 pm #

      The situation was like a deja – vu for the protagonist but the real life situation didn’t follow the script.

  4. Sanaa Rizvi August 11, 2015 at 2:38 pm #

    Such beautiful yearning in this piece 🙂

  5. Sherry Blue Sky August 11, 2015 at 4:46 pm #

    This is a cool glimpsed moment………..I can see her!!!!

  6. ihatepoetry August 11, 2015 at 7:45 pm #

    I’ve been there too, babe. We all have. Good write.

  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) August 11, 2015 at 8:08 pm #

    There is a dream come true in this..

  8. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) August 12, 2015 at 5:57 am #

    Sweetly poignant.

  9. Rommy August 13, 2015 at 6:07 pm #

    Our imaginations can conjure up the prettiest words – too bad others don’t follow the script sometimes.

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