The mortal coil – TB

31 Aug

Physics tells us if you wait
Time risks disappearing altogether
Creating something akin to an empty space.
Experience tells us if you rush into things,
You end up being trapped in a moment you can’t get out of,
You turn left, you turn right not being able to shake off the mortal coil.


6 Responses to “The mortal coil – TB”

  1. magalyguerrero September 1, 2014 at 11:21 am #

    May we all dance with time and experience until we find our balance…

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) September 1, 2014 at 11:24 am #

    I guess that waiting can be the best way of failing by being successful

  3. kaykuala September 1, 2014 at 2:13 pm #

    More haste less speed! If only things can just fall into place! Nice lines Crayfish!


  4. Gillena Cox September 1, 2014 at 3:59 pm #

    there is a lesson coiled in here, thanks for sharing; have a nice Monday

    much love…

  5. kimnelsonwrites September 3, 2014 at 4:40 pm #

    You made me reconsider. Time and empty space… I always considered it to be the opposite – all time occurring at once, vivid and real and true.

  6. Kenia Cris September 15, 2014 at 10:57 am #

    Being such a nerd myself, I love it when poetry meets science. A favorite this one. ❤

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