A sinister construction – TB

3 Aug

A sinister construction,
A you and me production.
He thinks,
I feel.
I share,
He steals.
His curt truth
Causes blindness.
I match his rigour
With kindness.
I aim for his heart
And hit the sky.
He aims for the sky
And strikes my head.

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6 Responses to “A sinister construction – TB”

  1. marcoantonio arellano August 4, 2014 at 10:38 am #

    an unhealthy relationship. when it becomes physical it should cease.

  2. georgeplace2013 August 4, 2014 at 10:58 am #

    The short sentences are very effective. Those last two lines a wallop to the heart

  3. arushiahuja August 4, 2014 at 11:01 am #

    oh! strikes your head!? i was almost enjoying the perfect match here till he hit your head!! 🙂

  4. Gillena Cox August 4, 2014 at 5:44 pm #

    umm; i’m reading perspectives, and, not necessary within a frame of simpatico; have a nice Monday

    much love…

  5. Miss Stacy August 5, 2014 at 1:19 am #

    well, love literally knocked you out!

    enjoyable read into the ups and downs of a relationship!

    stacy lynn mar
    very thought-provoking read. loved your comparisons here with humans, god, caterpillars. excellent!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

  6. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) August 5, 2014 at 9:54 pm #

    Seems a very painful relationship….

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