Falling – TB

12 Jul

When I taught you to fly,
I forgot to tell you
There was no sky.
The birds,
They’re unreal,
And not to be heard.
When I told you to shine like the sun,
I forgot to mention
there wasn’t one.
It no longer shines,
Since it fell from
The sky
Which it took
With it
When it fell


6 Responses to “Falling – TB”

  1. magalyguerrero July 14, 2014 at 1:25 pm #

    It must be difficult to take flight from a ground drowning in sky and burning with sun…

  2. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) July 14, 2014 at 3:31 pm #

    Seems there is so many obstacles to flying when the sun and sky have fallen, Interesting concept…nice work!

  3. Kathryn Dyche Dechairo July 14, 2014 at 4:01 pm #

    sometimes words are enough

  4. Arushi ahuja July 15, 2014 at 7:26 am #

    Somethings are slowly diminishing … This poem speaks of a ill fufture we might see… Really well put…

  5. kaykuala h July 15, 2014 at 8:05 am #

    It is really a challenge with all the obstacles not realized before proceeding. This situation can occur in many instances of unpreparedness! Well crafted Crayfish!


  6. georgeplace2013 July 15, 2014 at 11:02 am #

    Knowing how to fly but no place to fly through…sad.

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