a past confession – TB

14 May

Hold it down!
Keep it in!
This is my confession
From within.
If I laid my armour down
And let the amour in.
My heart then she would own.
That’d mean she’d win.

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10 Responses to “a past confession – TB”

  1. Susan May 14, 2014 at 1:09 pm #

    hahaha! love the rhyming, the need for armor and amour!

  2. lolamouse May 14, 2014 at 1:24 pm #

    Love it! Playful but so often true.

  3. magalyguerrero May 14, 2014 at 1:29 pm #

    “Oh, Cara mia!”

    Yes, I just imagined Gomez saying this to Morticia. 😀

    Awesome.

  4. Mama Zen May 14, 2014 at 2:30 pm #

    Love the play between armor and amour!

  5. georgeplace2013 May 14, 2014 at 3:00 pm #

    funny and clever

  6. Hannah Gosselin May 14, 2014 at 4:26 pm #

    I also love the use of armor and armour…says so much! Well done.

  7. C.C. May 15, 2014 at 2:02 am #

    Great rhythm 🙂

  8. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) May 15, 2014 at 4:26 am #

    Such a fun piece! I too love the word play of armor and amour

  9. CC Champagne May 15, 2014 at 11:28 am #

    This is beautiful and has a lovely rhythm! Well done!

  10. Poet Laundry May 15, 2014 at 9:21 pm #

    This made me smile!

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