Purgatory waiting – TB

21 Mar

Shall I take you through?
No, don’t worry, no need to.
But it’s dark and you won’t find your way.
It’s no problem, it’s OK.
Go through the door and it’s on your right.
Down the corridor, past the fright, and then right.
Knock knock, knock knock, are you busy?
No, just the person I wanted to see.
Why is it that you’ve called me in?
The time has come, dear Mickey Finn.
What’s the diagnosis and what’s next?
It’s definitely terminal but we can’t say yet.
Please take a seat out in the dark
And wait for the verdict of our Czar.

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6 Responses to “Purgatory waiting – TB”

  1. Kenia Cris March 23, 2014 at 1:31 am #

    Smart writing and the rhythm has me from the beginning to the end.

  2. Brendan March 31, 2014 at 9:19 am #

    There are days along here that feel like this waiting room outside Purgatory. Waiting for verdicts, fates. The clinical clip of this matches well with the flip delivery. And that czar, exactly …

  3. Marlon Oliveira March 31, 2014 at 11:36 am #

    Really enjoyable reading it out loud.

    =)

    • Mark Kerstetter March 31, 2014 at 4:48 pm #

      It is good read aloud, but I’d hate to be in that waiting room.

  4. Kim Nelson March 31, 2014 at 5:22 pm #

    A fun cadence despite the challenging topic, which makes this a compelling read.

  5. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) March 31, 2014 at 10:29 pm #

    A scary place of waiting…such a well crafted piece

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